When I miss u

When I miss u

Every breath i take..i try to count the days that go by...
like the leaves that fall..during the autumn...
does the days pass one by one...my love...
as i wait for our dream come true...
when you would take me away...
as in our dreams we live...
not so far is our day...
yet my heart aches...
as i scribble...
i miss you...
my love...

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A simple girl who still believes in the miracles that happen in fairy tales. A confused soul who is in search of the meaning of life. A Civil Engineer who wishes to make this world a better place to live. A woman who is independent yet bound by the warmth of love. PS: Some of my posts are pun intended and do not intend to hurt anyone.

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  1. Kabir #

    Speechless.. So beautifully expressed :)

  2. Btw, you might love to know that When I miss you is the most widely read poem on The Lazy Us till now.

    :D :D :D

    • Yes! I just saw it on the Popular Posts! That makes me on Cloud Nine!!

      I wonder if its some technical SEO thing :O ‘coz in my personal blog a post about rain gets around 700 to 800 visits a day!! And that is something with the Google search I guess!! Not about Genuine readers! Sigh!! I have no idea about those technical sides! Anyway I like to see my poem on the right side every time I log in! :D

      • Yes, it has to do with the SEO thing. But in this case one of the most important factors is that people who come from SEO read up the post for the length of the poem is really short and they won’t mind sharing it in return. :)

        As far as I realize the readers, shorter posts with images tend to do better than others.

        • Thats true! I myself love reading posts that are smaller and with images! :)

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A simple girl who still believes in the miracles that happen in fairy tales. A confused soul who is in search of the meaning of life. A Civil Engineer who wishes to make this world a better place to live. A woman who is independent yet bound by the warmth of love. PS: Some of my posts are pun intended and do not intend to hurt anyone.

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